tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-936140009471327311.post7048719365467204739..comments2023-05-14T08:07:49.911-07:00Comments on My Art&Writing: Leviathan FanFic Chapter/Part 1Middy Mileshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10617357472768047275noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-936140009471327311.post-90696304385451368792011-12-29T17:18:33.206-08:002011-12-29T17:18:33.206-08:00Was it??? I'll see if I can re-vamp it to make...Was it??? I'll see if I can re-vamp it to make it more Deryn-esque. I kind of want to keep a flashback somewhere in there, though... any suggestions about what I can do to make it better?Middy Mileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10617357472768047275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-936140009471327311.post-6722377076409547342011-12-29T17:10:48.937-08:002011-12-29T17:10:48.937-08:00I love it!!!! You totally captured the emoness of ...I love it!!!! You totally captured the emoness of Alek and the fearlessness of Deryn! But I thought that the flashback was a bit too emo for Deryn.Deryn Sharphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07988349910430747093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-936140009471327311.post-9948608175801538412011-12-29T17:05:04.484-08:002011-12-29T17:05:04.484-08:00By the way, I have, like, 15 more pages worth of s...By the way, I have, like, 15 more pages worth of stuff to put up. So if you like it I can post it at any time...Middy Mileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10617357472768047275noreply@blogger.com